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Lioldra, Chapter 1 (It's here! I did it!, the novel begins)

Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 5:07 pm
by Qmaus
Removed by author.

Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 6:17 am
by SpenSir
Dude, great story. Nice swing of emotion and understanding between different characters. More more!!

Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 6:32 am
by Ladyheart
Woot I loved it and cant wait to read more. Thanks for the great reading during my morning coffee. I am very curious though about what is coming next so dont keep me waiting to long lol.

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 7:05 am
by Lanyder
Bump for Unikyte

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:16 pm
by unikyte
Thanks Lany! cant wait to read it.
And thank you Qmaus

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:48 pm
by unikyte
I LOVED it! :love10:
More please.
Very well written and has me eager for the next chapter.

Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:39 am
by Tardar
Very well written Q. Reading that first chapter, I got the feeling that it was very thought out. I was very disappointed at the end that the story didn't continue however, and am looking forward to the next installment. You did a great job making me feel the characters and their feelings, while not going overboard.

Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:33 pm
by Dips
Awesome man!

I have always enjoyed your stories. Looking forward to more!

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 7:15 am
by unikyte

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:50 am
by Qmaus
unikyte wrote:waiting,,,,,
LOL, it's coming hon, I promise. Just doing some final editing and polishing. Will be ready for posting at some point between tomorrow and Saturday!

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:29 am
by Bobbert

If the Bard dies, I'm gonna be pissed. :lol:

Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:21 am
by Bobbert

On my way from meeting to meeting and I run to check the boards. Still no Qmaus update. Somebody fly out there and help him push the [ENTER] button.

Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:31 am
by SpenSir

Ummm, it's Thursday...

Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 11:52 am
by Bobbert
HEY! He said somewhere between Wednesday and Saturday. Even my redneck education tells me that today, Thursday falls into his dynamic dateline.

Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 6:33 pm
by Qmaus
Yeah, sorry guys. I chose that time frame because I knew I was having a busy week. Had to put off the final editing because there's an opening at work for a promotion (supervisor of my current job) and management indicated to us that we should put in for it if interested because they didn't expect many outside people to apply for it.

It's about 10k more per year than I currently make and deadline for submitting application package (package was about 14 pages long) was today, so I've been working hard on it most of this week. I also ran into a little problem with it because the "apply online" button for this job on the usajobs website directs you to a "page cannot be displayed" url.

So I finished it up and hand-walked my package into Human Resources this morning and personally gave it to the ranking HR officer for the position. Wish me luck!

Anyway, so that is the reason for the delay and for giving myself such a lengthy timeline for the posting of chapter two.

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:29 am
by Tardar
All right, you are forgiven for now...

But the package has been delivered.


Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:52 am
by Qmaus
LOL, posting of chapter two will be completed in approximately 5-10 minutes.

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 11:03 am
by Tardar