Lioldra, Chapter 1 (It's here! I did it!, the novel begins)

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Lioldra, Chapter 1 (It's here! I did it!, the novel begins)

Postby Qmaus » Tue Oct 31, 2006 5:07 pm

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Postby SpenSir » Wed Nov 01, 2006 6:17 am

Dude, great story. Nice swing of emotion and understanding between different characters. More more!!

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Postby Ladyheart » Wed Nov 01, 2006 6:32 am

Woot I loved it and cant wait to read more. Thanks for the great reading during my morning coffee. I am very curious though about what is coming next so dont keep me waiting to long lol.
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Postby Lanyder » Thu Nov 09, 2006 7:05 am

Bump for Unikyte

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Postby unikyte » Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:16 pm

Thanks Lany! cant wait to read it.
And thank you Qmaus

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Postby unikyte » Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:48 pm

I LOVED it! :love10:
More please.
Very well written and has me eager for the next chapter.

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Postby Tardar » Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:39 am

Very well written Q. Reading that first chapter, I got the feeling that it was very thought out. I was very disappointed at the end that the story didn't continue however, and am looking forward to the next installment. You did a great job making me feel the characters and their feelings, while not going overboard.
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Postby Dips » Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:33 pm

Awesome man!

I have always enjoyed your stories. Looking forward to more!

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Postby unikyte » Tue Nov 14, 2006 7:15 am

waiting,,,,,
waiting,,,,
waiting,,,,

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Postby Qmaus » Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:50 am

unikyte wrote:waiting,,,,,
waiting,,,,
waiting,,,,


LOL, it's coming hon, I promise. Just doing some final editing and polishing. Will be ready for posting at some point between tomorrow and Saturday!

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Postby Bobbert » Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:29 am

Hmmm...HOW ABOUT NOW???

If the Bard dies, I'm gonna be pissed. :lol:

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Postby Bobbert » Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:21 am

<SIGH>....

On my way from meeting to meeting and I run to check the boards. Still no Qmaus update. Somebody fly out there and help him push the [ENTER] button.

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Postby SpenSir » Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:31 am

Hello....

Ummm, it's Thursday...

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Postby Bobbert » Thu Nov 16, 2006 11:52 am

HEY! He said somewhere between Wednesday and Saturday. Even my redneck education tells me that today, Thursday falls into his dynamic dateline.

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Postby Qmaus » Thu Nov 16, 2006 6:33 pm

Yeah, sorry guys. I chose that time frame because I knew I was having a busy week. Had to put off the final editing because there's an opening at work for a promotion (supervisor of my current job) and management indicated to us that we should put in for it if interested because they didn't expect many outside people to apply for it.

It's about 10k more per year than I currently make and deadline for submitting application package (package was about 14 pages long) was today, so I've been working hard on it most of this week. I also ran into a little problem with it because the "apply online" button for this job on the usajobs website directs you to a "page cannot be displayed" url.

So I finished it up and hand-walked my package into Human Resources this morning and personally gave it to the ranking HR officer for the position. Wish me luck!

Anyway, so that is the reason for the delay and for giving myself such a lengthy timeline for the posting of chapter two.

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Postby Tardar » Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:29 am

All right, you are forgiven for now...

But the package has been delivered.

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Postby Qmaus » Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:52 am

LOL, posting of chapter two will be completed in approximately 5-10 minutes.

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Postby Tardar » Fri Nov 17, 2006 11:03 am

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