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A sneak peek of things to come

Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 9:41 pm
by Qmaus
Hi guys!
Well, since people seemed to enjoy 'Inheritance', I thought I would boldly set my sights on a bigger project and try to slowly write the novel that's been in my head for years. I've not yet started the first chapter and can't even begin to say when I will have it ready and posted, but I thought I'd at least give a little preview.

What you see here is basically a snippet from what will eventually be one of the early chapters of the finished project. This little "peek" was written and edited in less than three hours, so it's actually a rough draft. As a result, you can expect that it will be a choppier read than 'Inheritance' was; the words won't flow together as smoothly. It's likely the final version will be a bit longer and edited more heavily in order to feel a bit more polished.

Nevertheless, I figured I'd just toss this up for you to give you something to check out. The title of the finished project will be "Lioldra", which is the name of the main character. By the way, Lioldra doesn't appear in this snippet, LOL. In fact, this particular piece of the story takes place before Lioldra is even born, and instead focuses slightly on Lioldra's father, General Teyev.